Finale's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bloodthirsty]

nice job

your coloring is remarkable. how do you get such clean shapes on the armor?

the only thing that looks off to me is the unfortunate fellow getting slashed. His face looks a bit weird. The positioning of the nose, eyes and mouth looks a bit distorted.
Also the girl's face pops out of the picture in a strange way that doesn't seem to fit the rest of the style.

i feel weird giving critique to you but i know i appreciate when others critique me so i hope you don't mind.

AlvinHew responds:

I appreciate both compliments and critique, so thanks.

[early morning]

decent

she looks a bit "cardboard cut-out ish". thats about it. and maybe work on adding more to the background. I like the general feeling though

ehix responds:

Thanks for the advice :) to be honest i was too tired and lazy to put anything more in backgr. what would you change here and how ? i can use any clue that could help me improve my skills :)

[mindchamber's red baron!]

great

i really love this.. its clever,, and i like your coloring style a lot. I wish I could color like that. How long have you been at it? coloring i mean

jouste responds:

i used to never color anything.

i started coloring seriously about two years ago. i still have a long way to go but its good to hear that i'm getting better.

thanks for the high score and review!

*highfives*

[Subject nr 014]

cool

this is neat..

SimonG responds:

Thanks :)

[Detective Chicken]

hehe

clever.

mortalartist responds:

indeed :D

[Blaze X Book 1 Cover]

watch your poses

everything's really great but your figures tend to look like cardboard cut outs. try to practice drawing from real poses off google or something to make your characters look more dynamic. Thats it from me though great job and your manga sounds interesting.

Willpinoy responds:

Really? I don't see what you mean but thanks for the critique. I'll take into account what you've said.

[Yeti]

Ok

It alright just clean up the lines a bit and maybe be more patient and give it a more interesting back ground. I think a work like this needs it.

TemplarOfBacon responds:

Actually this is just a quickie drawing, as mentioned in the description (which explains the impatience and haphazard linework xD). But if I was to make this a full piece, then I'd do exactly as you suggested. Thanks anyways though :)

[Murlus' Quest]

holy..

this must have taken forever. the bg is amazing... nothing else to say

knockwurst responds:

oh yes it took FOREVER because I made it with a mouse lol. Thank you once again Finale : )

[Bonkalicious]

ahhh

you are sooooo close to being pure god stuff with this style. Just make the legs less skinny and I'd buy this!!!

knockwurst responds:

haha thank you, yes I look back and realize her legs aren't what I wanted them to be, but I learn with each new drawing : )

[Nova Blizzard Art contest 2005]

amazing

background could use a bit of cleaning up though

knockwurst responds:

I agree, it's an old piece and I'd like to take another shot at the Starcraft universe soon.