i agree
finish this up. sharpen it. you have the skill to do so.
i agree
finish this up. sharpen it. you have the skill to do so.
decent
the clouds are meh. a better background would have been better.
nice job
your coloring is remarkable. how do you get such clean shapes on the armor?
the only thing that looks off to me is the unfortunate fellow getting slashed. His face looks a bit weird. The positioning of the nose, eyes and mouth looks a bit distorted.
Also the girl's face pops out of the picture in a strange way that doesn't seem to fit the rest of the style.
i feel weird giving critique to you but i know i appreciate when others critique me so i hope you don't mind.
I appreciate both compliments and critique, so thanks.
brrrr.
sents tingles up my spine. its creepy but good haha
decent
she looks a bit "cardboard cut-out ish". thats about it. and maybe work on adding more to the background. I like the general feeling though
Thanks for the advice :) to be honest i was too tired and lazy to put anything more in backgr. what would you change here and how ? i can use any clue that could help me improve my skills :)
great
i really love this.. its clever,, and i like your coloring style a lot. I wish I could color like that. How long have you been at it? coloring i mean
i used to never color anything.
i started coloring seriously about two years ago. i still have a long way to go but its good to hear that i'm getting better.
thanks for the high score and review!
*highfives*
cool
this is neat..
Thanks :)
hehe
clever.
indeed :D
gross...
this character looks slimy.
watch your poses
everything's really great but your figures tend to look like cardboard cut outs. try to practice drawing from real poses off google or something to make your characters look more dynamic. Thats it from me though great job and your manga sounds interesting.
Really? I don't see what you mean but thanks for the critique. I'll take into account what you've said.
Hi
Age 32, Male
A School
Joined on 11/26/05