Finale's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sweet Kiss]

its not bad

you are well on ur way to being outstanding. just pay more attention to creating good anatomy and practice drawing the body from different angles to get this kind of shot looking even better. as always, tho it is a sketch, try cleaner lines and more definition on the clothing and feet/ hands. Specifically, the girl's arms are too small and dont liik like they are attached correctly. Still a good piece and please make more!! Please check out my stuff also and scout !! : )

knuxrouge responds:

The arm appears short because it's tilted in towards the guy, because her hand is on his chest.

I guess I failed making it obvious.

[Seagreen]

wow

this is awesome. you should put out a paint tutorial. How did you paint this?

[HIP]

cool

interesting style, but i agree that the shoes are a bit lame.... keep it up tho.

[awesome]

unbelievable...

a mouse? amazing, but why???? haha

TheOmiyan responds:

Had nothing else to draw with my pen dried out.

[Ready for battle]

a cool style

it looks like it was painted/carved from stone.. Nice job... plz check out my work also!!

mibodega responds:

Thanks

[Flying island]

wow

really great landscape. The clouds really give this work a holy feel, like the-wickid-jester said. very nice

[Gunter and Phoebe in Granville]

good

To me though, your building roofs and your sidewalk need to adhere a bit more closely to the rules of the vanishing point. Perhaps straighter lines would fix this. Great piece of work regardless. Painting is one of the hardest mediums I have seen on newgrounds so good job.

[Last stand]

same deal

just try to clean up your lines a bit. A backround would have made this, but whatever. Your characters are good enough.

ZeWitchKid responds:

i think i already excused myself about the background thingy
as for the lines, i didnt had any tablet at the time, this is a direct scan then vectorised with illustrator, and Adobe illustrator have the bad habit to mess up with the details